This is a poem I wrote a couple of years ago. It is one of my favorites. I wrote it in a flurry of inspiration one morning while I was watching the birds sitting on a telephone wire outside my office window.
I posted it on a couple of the more elite poetry forums for critique and it didn’t receive very good reviews. The snobs said it was too cutesy. But hey, what do they know? At least you can friggin understand what I am trying to say, unlike so much of THEIR poetry.
Maybe there are some of you out there who will enjoy it.
BIRD CHURCH
On a long black pew sit our feathered friends,
First giving thanks for a leaf-free view of their God.
A loner in the morning mist, hunched down in his gray coat,
steals glances at the rest of the congregation.
Communing in the form of respectful silence,
the birds save their singing for a less holy time or for danger.
The hierarchy is evident,
even the deacons give reverence to Pastor Bird.
The service is a short one, a sermon on patience,
but a few rudely exit while the pastor is still preaching.
Closing prayer brings twitters of wish you wells and fly with God,
as the birds soar away to work for Nature and family.
Left sitting on the wire, the loner is in no hurry.
He’s a bachelor, free to fly at his leisure.
Still, every morning at Bird Church, he prays
to meet the crimson coated bird of his dreams.